Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Creative writing "The Colony"

     Hello, I'm Sungone, and I'm going to make a creative writing. My story's name is "The Colony". My story's genre is fantasy, and the main characters are Gerrard and Sebastian. Now, let me explain about this story.

     This story begins in Europe. Gerrard and Sebastian were the best friends. They played gun fighting when they were young. They were very interested in gun fighting. One day, Gerrard got hurt by the bullet which was shot by Sebastian. Sebastian was very sorry and worried about the hurt. The hurt was cured, but the scar was remained. After that, Sebastian thought that he will never play the gun fighting again and he would never become a soldier. Also, Gerrard went to the shooting range with his father and saw his father shooting on the target exactly. His father was the soldier who treated guns very well. Gerrard was really excited and he wanted to use a real gun, but his father didn't allow it of course. Also, France invaded Germany at 2020. Germany defended it easily with their upgraded guns and weapons like jets or tanks. That is why Gerrard decided to be a German soldier at the future. One day, Gerrard and Sebastian talked about their future jobs. Gerrard said to Sebastian that he wants to be a German soldier. Then Sebastian said that if he becomes a soldier, he will regret about his job. Gerrard asked why. Sebastian answered that he should kill a lot of enemies. Gerrard said that enemies are people who invaded his country and they must get punishment by death. Sebastian disagreed it strongly because enemies are also lifes and killing them can't be true again. Then Sebastian told his grandfather's story. His grandfather experienced the World War 2. His grandfather was Jewish, and he was killed by German soldiers. Sebastian's father was very angry but he couldn't do anything. Unfortunately he was also Jewish, too. He added that the government should find another way instead of just killing them. Gerrard told his father's story, too. His father was working in Korea, but Korea was conquered and governed by Japan. Korea became a colony of Japan and Koreans were discriminated very much. After that, his father told him to be a soldier and keep his country. He told it to him everyday.
콜로니 (The Colony,
   After 20 years, Gerrard became a German soldier. At that time, France violated the peace treaty, and Germany was going to attack them. Gerrard arrived at France, and the war was occurred. Whiled shooting guns to the enemies, Gerrard found a familiar person who was running away. Then he got a gun shot and fell down. Gerrard looked at his face and Gerrard was very embarrassed. He was Sebastian! Then, what will happen?

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These are the ends of story. Thank you.

5 comments:

  1. Interesting story using creativity and imagination. The title of Colony is however a bit misleading referring to Korea - but your main setting of the story is Europe. I like you endings attempting to make your readers think! Keep up the good work.

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